Monday, February 19, 2007

HAIKU

Hi PS way back in October I did write a Haiku, based on the  5,7,5  syllable format. I hope you like it.

I tried to hear you
wind carried your voice away
so I remained deaf.

The simplicity of them is what draws me to Haiku I will try to write more in the future.

Simplicity.. by Tim Young

Simple things can be complicated
as
complicate things can be simple
your understanding
make the statement true or false.

2 comments:

Niall said...

I've got a black belt in Hiaku'
I've also got one in Feng Shui'
I'd like to get one in Origami'
but my class just folded up!

Ps said...

I loved the first one.Re read the second.Loved that as well!

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