Friday, November 21, 2008

instant poetry

Just a reminder about instant poetry, it when I think up a subject on the spot and just write a poem with thinking too much pretty much straight of the top of my head.

Head there is a good subject.

Head by Tim Young

What goes on
inside
deep down inside
what dark thoughts
inside my head.
Some time these thoughts
push their way
through
up
past my filters
of what I should say or not say
Their utterance
from my mouth
to the ears
of the lstener
may cause laughter
embarrassment
shock
or may be
all these.
but that's life
unpredictable
unstable
lovable.
Human life.

1 comment:

Niall said...

Here's my instant poetry regarding my head...

'Inside my Head'
By Niall young

Echo echo echo......

yours is much better as there's obviously something going on in yours!

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